You have about 25 mins to finish preparing for your Reading Assessment. Below is a copy of the poem and a reminder about some poetic devices. Read both now. Once you have done this I want you to pick quotes and try and explain what poetic device is being used and why the poet has used it. What does it make the reader think or feel?
Stop All The Clocks
W. H. Auden
Stop all the clocks, cut off the telephone,
Prevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone,
Silence the pianos and with muffled drum
Bring out the coffin, let the mourners come.
Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead
Scribbling on the sky the message He Is Dead,
Put crepe bows round the white necks of the public doves,
Let the traffic policemen wear black cotton gloves.
He was my North, my South, my East and West,
My working week and my Sunday rest,
My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song;
I thought that love would last for ever: I was wrong.
The stars are not wanted now: put out every one;
Pack up the moon and dismantle the sun;
Pour away the ocean and sweep up the wood.
For nothing now can ever come to any good.
Poetic Devices:
Metaphor is a comparison between two dissimilar things without using the word “like” or “as” to make the comparison.
1. The cast on Michael’s broken leg was a plaster shackle.
2. She was just a trophy to Ricardo, another object to possess.
3. The path of resentment is easier to travel than the road to forgiveness.
4. Waves of spam emails inundated his inbox.
5. Her eyes were fireflies.
Similes are comparisons between two unlike things using the word “like” or “as.”
Here are some examples of simile:
1. My mother’s kitchen was like a holy place: you couldn’t wear your shoes, you had to sit there at a certain time, and occasionally we’d pray.
2. The bottle rolled off the table like a teardrop.
3. The handshake felt like warm laundry.
4. She hung her head like a dying flower.
Alliteration is the repetition of the initial consonant sound in words.
Here is an example of alliteration:
1.Jakia jumped in the jar of jelly.
Repetition is when the writer or speaker knowingly repeats a word or group of words for effect.
Here is an example of repetition:
Nobody, oh nobody can make it out here alone.
this is a nice poem, i enjoyed reading it, katie.
ReplyDeleteIt is sad but beautiful isn't it Katie.
DeleteCool \ it makes you feel upset so i woudlnt be happy and read thisd because it makes you really sad like really sad and the poetic devices used are metaphors and repoitition
ReplyDelete-lloyd
great can you quote any metaphors?
DeleteLet aeroplanes circle moaning overhead
ReplyDeleteScribbling on the sky the message He Is Dead,
The author has used this as it is a rhyme.
My noon, my midnight, my talk, my song;
This sentence contains alliteration.
Why have they used this alliteration? What effect does it have?
Deletethis is a good one dan well done mate :)) lkloyd
DeleteGood to see you supporting one another!
DeleteRHYME SCHEME
ReplyDeleteMATT HA
What is the rhyme scheme Matt? Can you remember the poetic term we used to describe the rhyming - R------ C------
DeleteAA BB CC
DeleteGreat. Can you remember the poeti device I asked about? First word beginning with r second with c?
DeleteSIMILES
ReplyDeleteMATT HI
Can you find a simile?
DeleteStop all the clocks, cut off the telephone,
ReplyDeletePrevent the dog from barking with a juicy bone
OTT
MATT HI
Well Done Matt, some good skills.
DeleteWhat do you mean OTT? Over the top? Why do you think that? Do you feel it is an overreaction on the characters part?
DeletePack up the moon and dismantle the sun;
ReplyDeletethis is a metaphor because, you cant pack up the moon and dismantle the sun as they are non-manmade objects.
This makes the reader feel as if the writer is depressed and lonely because, those two objects give light and happiness to the world!
So he/she has lost all happiness...
Georgia Ellis and Megan Parker-Lowe
Nicely phrased girls. Strong emotions being felt here. Can you pick out some words to 'micro-analyse'?
Deleteits a great peom and there alot of repetition {shakirah}
ReplyDeleteshakira is right, its a really good poem and i enjoyed reading it, i would recomend it, KATIE
DeleteWhy is there reprtition? What is the poem trying to make us think?
DeleteTheres lots of rhymes.
ReplyDeleteDan J
What is the effect of rhyme? What does it make the reader do?
Delete"Let aeroplanes circle moaning overhead"
ReplyDeletethis is personification because aeroplanes dont moan. The writer is comparing this quote to a human.
why have they used the work moaning do you think Hannah?
Delete"Scribbling on the sky the message He Is Dead" this is personification,it is bringing it to life, making it sound like a person is scribbling on the sky when really there talking about a plane.
ReplyDeleteNice explanation
Deletemegan and georgia
I agree, beautifully phrased!
DeleteScribbling on the sky the message He Is Dead
ReplyDeleteIt is a metaphor because you can't actually write on the sky.
- Jordan
Well done Jordan !
Delete- Dan J
You are right and show some good understanding of the metaphor. Why are they writing it on the sky?
DeletePrevent the dog from barking = cant because its how it communicates
ReplyDeletematt ha
Good point. It is almost like they can't look at the dog being so alive and communicating isn't it Matt?
DeleteThanks guys for all your help. This info has given me a clear idea of what language is contained within this poem. :) thanks
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