The Crucible
As they were in the court, Proctor was arguing to save his wife. Abigail was trying to get his wife taken away so she can have him to herself. She wants something dones with Elizabeth so she can have Proctor who disliked her anyway. They had a relationship previously but loved his wife and not her. Paris disapproved of Proctor so was helping Abigail to get Proctors wife (Elizabeth) put in jail if he could, Proctor to. Abigail was in a forest with Mary and his slave and would deny seeing them.
You use some good vocabulary like "deny" here Matt. Well done.
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1. Make sure you actually describe when you write a scene Matt. It helps the reader imagine what you are talk g about.
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ReplyDeleteHello Matt, you have done really well to sum up a passage from a play as involved as The Crucible in so few words. This demonstrates good understanding of the plot.
It is great to see some older pupils taking part in the challenge; I am sure that you will inspire younger ones (like in my class) to take part.
Keep on writing.
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