The Crucible Court Scene:
The judge entered the court and sat down in his chair.
“In this court, you must swear to tell the truth, and nothing but the truth. This is the trial for Elizabeth Proctor, who is accused of practising witchcraft." The judge looked at his papers. “According to Abigail, you were dancing in the woods. Is this true?”
"No your honour” replied Elizabeth. “We also found a poppet in your house; you say it belongs to Mary Warren. Is this true Mary?”
“Yes your honour, it is, I made it in the court the other week, Abigail watched me make it.”
A very direct and dramatic opening Dan. Well used and correct.y formed dialogue too. Well done.
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Well done Dan, Crucible is very dramatic!
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