Friday, 17 May 2013

100 Word Challenge - Scenes From Books - Shakirah







Little Green Riding Hood:

One day there was a little girl called little Green Riding Hood. She was only ten years old and had dark black soft hair like snow - there was something different about her. She was a really bad girl and never listened to anyone.

One day mother had asked Little Green  Riding Hood to go to her dads house and bring him some soup that mum had made as he was very ill.  So she walk down the deepest, darkest part of the woods called the Never Seen Again . What’s down their?   Who knows what going to happen?
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  1. Sarah Findlater17 May 2013 at 21:30

    Shakira, I live your traditional opening. You also use some nice alliteration. Well done.

    Target:
    1. Be mindful for apostrophe use. look here for help http://youtu.be/rGeHg5i7OJo

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  2. Liz Grantham17 May 2013 at 22:14

    HI Shakira, This is an interesting story. A good effort. Well done.

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