Mark Zuckerburg: making Facebook
I was in my apartment when the idea for Facebook came around. My mate said “why don’t you make a social network site for Harvard students and I was like “Yeah let’s do that”. So as I was studying in class, I would go on the computers and draw up the plans for it. Then I had finally got the website going and had my first friend.
I was in my apartment when the idea for Facebook came around. My mate said “why don’t you make a social network site for Harvard students and I was like “Yeah let’s do that”. So as I was studying in class, I would go on the computers and draw up the plans for it. Then I had finally got the website going and had my first friend.
The word got out that I had made a social network site and people started to make accounts. People started telling others about the Harvard confidential site. I had to think up a name.
Facebook.
Matt, I like the way you have remained in role throughout your writing.
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1. Make Sure you close off speech marks when someone stops speaking in your writing.
2. Make sure you use some sophisticated vocabulary. Use your vocabulary book to help.
Hi Matt, I very much enjoyed reading this 100WC re-write. You really brought it to life. Well done :)
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