Zero had run away from Camp Green Lake:
Stanley trekking through the hot dessert, desperate to just feel fresh water run down his dry painful throat. He moves slowly across the dry crumbled waste land… He looks back to the camp thinking, “should I go back”??
Stanley trekking through the hot dessert, desperate to just feel fresh water run down his dry painful throat. He moves slowly across the dry crumbled waste land… He looks back to the camp thinking, “should I go back”??
He looks round and there he sees a blue blob miles away from him, through the steaming fog. He walks faster and faster even though it hurts, “it could be Zero” he thinks! It looks like a boat with writing on it?? Saying Mary Lo… Stanley bends down to see a small crack big enough for him to go through, There zero was lying peacefully!!
Megan, I love that you have made this piece really dramatic.
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1. You never need to use more than one question mark - be careful with this.