Friday, 17 May 2013

100 Word Challenge - Scenes From Books - Hannah P.





The Crucible
My favourite scene is where the girls are in the court room and Abigail is being accused. She can’t take being there so she pretends that Mary has sent spirits to come and get her. She starts pretending she’s having a fit and vanishes into thin air. The Court room in suspense…

Where did she go?

The girls kept quiet, mouths were closed and no one said a word... everyone was blissfully unaware of what happened. As soon as they looked at Mary thinking she really is a witch, everyone glares at her; suddenly she shouted "she’s in the woods!"

1 comment:

  1. Hannah, your use your ellipsis well here.

    Target:
    1. Ensure you jump straight into creative writing. No need for an introduction here.

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