Year 9 have been busy beavering away in press gang groups creating their very own magazines from planning to productions and on to distibution. Well done you lot. These mags are amazing!
Once we had worked so hard on these and completed them, we had the opportunity to read all the magazines the class had been putting together and review them for the tema to see. A great project and brillian tmagazines produced all round. Some of our best work.
This site is a place for Ms Findlater's Year 9 English students to upload work, view and comment on one another's work and revise topics for their English lessons and homework. Thanks for visiting.
Wednesday, 13 February 2013
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Alison
Out of the blue -
what does this phrase mean to you?
One hundred answers for one simple question.
Out of the big blue ocean,
where lots of great plans are set in motion.
As we set out to sea,
the big blue question scares me.
Alone in the blue.
Out of the blue never failed,
as my ship slowly sets sail.
Bang. Crash!
What to do in the deep, deep blue?
what does this phrase mean to you?
One hundred answers for one simple question.
Out of the big blue ocean,
where lots of great plans are set in motion.
As we set out to sea,
the big blue question scares me.
Alone in the blue.
Out of the blue never failed,
as my ship slowly sets sail.
Bang. Crash!
What to do in the deep, deep blue?
Friday, 8 February 2013
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Jordan
Winters warning
It was a cold winter’s day all was silent but the rattle of the branches of the pine tree against the window making it impossible to sleep, the constant howl of foxes hunting for food. The silent forest was enticing me, I couldn’t resist I had to explore. I hobble down the stairs stumbling at the bottom step, I reach the door the handle is cold I get my gloves and unlock the door, take a step outside and hear a voice saying “I’m over here Aaron follow my voice” I shouted “who are you and how do you know me”...
It was a cold winter’s day all was silent but the rattle of the branches of the pine tree against the window making it impossible to sleep, the constant howl of foxes hunting for food. The silent forest was enticing me, I couldn’t resist I had to explore. I hobble down the stairs stumbling at the bottom step, I reach the door the handle is cold I get my gloves and unlock the door, take a step outside and hear a voice saying “I’m over here Aaron follow my voice” I shouted “who are you and how do you know me”...
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Rina
I was alone on the beach in Hawaii. It was beautifuI. I took my surf board and
went surfing, the water was ice cold at first but I got used to it. I was
surfing when out of the blue my surf board disappeared. Suddenly a massive wave
came and took me under the deep blue water. I couldn’t breathe, I was scared.
I woke up on a mysterious beach, completely different to the one I was on before. It was lonely and silent you couldn’t even hear a thing. It looked like a deserted island. Where was I….
I woke up on a mysterious beach, completely different to the one I was on before. It was lonely and silent you couldn’t even hear a thing. It looked like a deserted island. Where was I….
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Megan
I walked along the sandy white beach; the sand was soft and warm the sea was
calm and blue.
I listened close to the wonderful sound of parrots, sitting in the tropical trees. I thought, “How lucky I am to be here with such beauty and pleasure”.
The sea lay calm and crystal clear, but suddenly everything seemed to change. My head started to hurt, my feet started to burn, the sea started to crash, the birds stared to fly… What was wrong, what did I do, where am I.
I turned round to… wake up!!!
I listened close to the wonderful sound of parrots, sitting in the tropical trees. I thought, “How lucky I am to be here with such beauty and pleasure”.
The sea lay calm and crystal clear, but suddenly everything seemed to change. My head started to hurt, my feet started to burn, the sea started to crash, the birds stared to fly… What was wrong, what did I do, where am I.
I turned round to… wake up!!!
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Lloyd
The walls are painted every colour in the rainbow, the floor is black. Pitch
black.
Everything is quiet.
There aren’t any doors just silence and darkness sitting here alone, I don’t know if I’m dreaming or not and I cannot escape. It feels like forever and then a door appears. I open it to find complete blackness and then I fall and land on a spot of light, there’s a white door infront of me.
I walk up towards it slowly. Then I open it as fast as I can and I wake up in bed.
Everything is quiet.
There aren’t any doors just silence and darkness sitting here alone, I don’t know if I’m dreaming or not and I cannot escape. It feels like forever and then a door appears. I open it to find complete blackness and then I fall and land on a spot of light, there’s a white door infront of me.
I walk up towards it slowly. Then I open it as fast as I can and I wake up in bed.
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Hannah
Falling asleep, sometimes I am on a beach with my family that I won’t see.
Sometimes I’m falling and can’t stop it; it just frightens the life out of me
out of the blue. Dreams normally end in nightmares, scary as they are they come
and go when they like - controlling your mind.
I overthink with my mind, they run over and over…
As I lie here thinking what this mess has done to me, it’s like my own mind is against me. Circling, confusing, over-powering, fighting, turning.. Bang! It was out of the blue.
I overthink with my mind, they run over and over…
As I lie here thinking what this mess has done to me, it’s like my own mind is against me. Circling, confusing, over-powering, fighting, turning.. Bang! It was out of the blue.
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Ryan
One day on the island of Zimbabwe, Jayson Brodey is running from Vaas and his men. The men have their guns and are in their cars. Jayson is kidnapped. Then he manages to escape the camp.
Suddenly, as he is crossing the road across the river, the road brakes and he falls in to the river. He gets knocked out on his way down stream. A man with no name pulls him out and brings him to his camp and gives him food and water and a gun. He is now going to kill Vaas.
I wonder what will happen?
Suddenly, as he is crossing the road across the river, the road brakes and he falls in to the river. He gets knocked out on his way down stream. A man with no name pulls him out and brings him to his camp and gives him food and water and a gun. He is now going to kill Vaas.
I wonder what will happen?
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Dan J
“The Alley-Way”
I was slowly walking down the dark alley-way, when I met a man named Anthony. He was a bit strange, but otherwise a lovely man. Then all of a sudden he pulled out a piercing dagger; he stabbed me hard with it.
I staggered to the ground like a corpse being thrown wildly without care. I screamed for help - no one came. I slowly crawled in agony to the end of the alley-way. All the people I thought I knew, didn’t even help me. I thought they were my friends! Just seconds after, I painstakingly bled out to my eternal death.
I was slowly walking down the dark alley-way, when I met a man named Anthony. He was a bit strange, but otherwise a lovely man. Then all of a sudden he pulled out a piercing dagger; he stabbed me hard with it.
I staggered to the ground like a corpse being thrown wildly without care. I screamed for help - no one came. I slowly crawled in agony to the end of the alley-way. All the people I thought I knew, didn’t even help me. I thought they were my friends! Just seconds after, I painstakingly bled out to my eternal death.
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Georgia
Here I am once again sitting at the beach on a family trip out. I don’t know why
we have these family trips they are so boring.
“Come on George, come surfing with us” shouted dad from the sea.
I stood up and headed to the sea. My dad just surfed a wave which was cool but I was going to show him how it’s done. I grabbed my surf board and… then all off a sudden a massive wave came crashing towards me. I fell over. Out of the blue my dead grandma said “how are you my princess”.
“Come on George, come surfing with us” shouted dad from the sea.
I stood up and headed to the sea. My dad just surfed a wave which was cool but I was going to show him how it’s done. I grabbed my surf board and… then all off a sudden a massive wave came crashing towards me. I fell over. Out of the blue my dead grandma said “how are you my princess”.
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Matt Hi
He was in the forest to get to a log cabin he had been told about by his friend. It
was dare. It was so risky because there was a man who would take the people and
would make them do chores for him. If they tried to run they would appear back in
his house and get put in a jail for however long he chose. He makes them do
things such as mine get fire wood, get food and build weapons. he always notices when they are gone because he set a time for them.
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - William
It was a dark gloomy day; it felt depressing going to school on a day like this.
I wish the school would close because its been snowing for 6 days non-stop. All
my teachers and classmates feel the same as me; we think it’s ridiculous that we
have to come to school when it snows.
The windows are all frozen so we can’t see outside. I’m guessing it’s bad because there’s no internet connection. Then suddenly it came. The words from heaven “the school is closed due to the snow”. “YES” we cried. It’s the best news we’ve heard in ages!
The windows are all frozen so we can’t see outside. I’m guessing it’s bad because there’s no internet connection. Then suddenly it came. The words from heaven “the school is closed due to the snow”. “YES” we cried. It’s the best news we’ve heard in ages!
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Shakirah
Its Monday again, me on my own walking around like a lost puppy in the big wide
world. Why doesn’t anyone like me? What have I done wrong? Is it because I’m
different?
It’s so out of the blue anyway it's the firsts lesson of the year and the worst lesson ENGLISH the teacher is so nice but I just can't get the hang of it and I have to sit next to the school bully Jack. He’s so annoying and always calling people names for no reason but anyway I hope he knows what coming for him in the future.
It’s so out of the blue anyway it's the firsts lesson of the year and the worst lesson ENGLISH the teacher is so nice but I just can't get the hang of it and I have to sit next to the school bully Jack. He’s so annoying and always calling people names for no reason but anyway I hope he knows what coming for him in the future.
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Dan C
Bob woke at 7 AM on a cold Sunday morning. He walked downstairs, walked over to
the fridge, and got the milk out. He then got a bowl out of his cupboard. He was
about to get the cornflakes out of his cabinet when suddenly, out of the blue a
rat scurried across the floor!
“ARRGH!” screamed Bob.
Bob reached for the cereal bowl and threw it at the rat. It hit it right in the head, and decapitated it, leaving the body scurrying around on its own. The rat slowly stopped moving, and Bob made a sigh of relief.
“ARRGH!” screamed Bob.
Bob reached for the cereal bowl and threw it at the rat. It hit it right in the head, and decapitated it, leaving the body scurrying around on its own. The rat slowly stopped moving, and Bob made a sigh of relief.
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Matt Ha
It is a clear crystal day on the beach then the sound the horn, it’s a danger
horn. The life-guard springs into action. Then it appears a great white shark
that’s what all the fuss is about, then out of the blue music starts playing.
Child music. Haunted music.
The music stops then the horn stops, it all goes back to normal like nothing has happened. They all get back to what they were doing. It sounds again, everyone panics except me because it a few minutes. This time the music doesn’t play. This time it stays this way forever
The music stops then the horn stops, it all goes back to normal like nothing has happened. They all get back to what they were doing. It sounds again, everyone panics except me because it a few minutes. This time the music doesn’t play. This time it stays this way forever
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Katie
Walking along with the blue sky in front of me, wanting to walk along the
untouched sand. It looked so beautiful, untouched; no nothing.
The light blue sea’s gleaming into my eyes, as I sit on the untouched ocean, over thinking with my mind…
As I look up, the blue circle is looking at me, telling me everything is going to be ok.
The untouched sand was no longer untouched, with my crawling feet all around it.
As I look around there was nothing around me, just me, thinking, and the deep blue sea.
The light blue sea’s gleaming into my eyes, as I sit on the untouched ocean, over thinking with my mind…
As I look up, the blue circle is looking at me, telling me everything is going to be ok.
The untouched sand was no longer untouched, with my crawling feet all around it.
As I look around there was nothing around me, just me, thinking, and the deep blue sea.
100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue
Post your first ever 100 word challenge stories. The theme this week is 'out of the blue'.
Below are the pictures you will be analysing before writing your stories, to get some inspiration.
Tuesday, 5 February 2013
The Massacre by William
The
massacre
The noise
thundered in the soldier’s ears as bullets fly past like bolts of lightning.
Rockets scream past leaving a gust of thick smoke,
Turrets fire
louder than a crying baby.
The crashing
planes above are like fireworks exploding bright as the sun and quick as a
comet, it makes its final journey to the ground.
“THERES TWO
OF US LEFT!” cried the commander
“THERES
STILL A CHANCE!” replied the soldier.
They make
their charge but are caught by an unexpected rocket.
The battle
is lost.
The end.
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