Walking along with the blue sky in front of me, wanting to walk along the
untouched sand. It looked so beautiful, untouched; no nothing.
The light
blue sea’s gleaming into my eyes, as I sit on the untouched ocean, over thinking
with my mind…
As I look up, the blue circle is looking at me, telling me
everything is going to be ok.
The untouched sand was no longer untouched,
with my crawling feet all around it.
As I look around there was nothing
around me, just me, thinking, and the deep blue sea.
Such beautiful imagery Katie. Great use of repetition.
ReplyDeleteTarget for next time - experiment with exclamation marks and question marks for effect.
good work katie keep it up just try to use more puncuation like question marks
ReplyDeletegeorgia ellis
good descriptions
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