I walked along the sandy white beach; the sand was soft and warm the sea was
calm and blue.
I listened close to the wonderful sound of parrots, sitting in
the tropical trees. I thought, “How lucky I am to be here with such beauty
and pleasure”.
The sea lay calm and crystal clear, but suddenly everything
seemed to change. My head started to hurt, my feet started to burn, the sea
started to crash, the birds stared to fly… What was wrong, what did I do,
where am I.
I turned round to… wake up!!!
What a wonderfully tropical scene! I love your use of alliteration.
ReplyDeleteTarget for future - make sure you use question marks if you include a question in your writing.
use more question marks megan but you have a really good poem keep it up and keep using good vocabulary
ReplyDeletegood story megan nice use of voacb keep it up
ReplyDeletegeorgia ellis