It is a clear crystal day on the beach then the sound the horn, it’s a danger
horn. The life-guard springs into action. Then it appears a great white shark
that’s what all the fuss is about, then out of the blue music starts playing.
Child music. Haunted music.
The music stops then the horn stops, it all goes
back to normal like nothing has happened. They all get back to what they were
doing. It sounds again, everyone panics except me because it a few minutes. This
time the music doesn’t play. This time it stays this way forever
A wonderful creation Matt. I love your use of repetition of certain words. You also use a great short sentence for effect. You should be proud of is 100 word story.
ReplyDeleteGood luck in the competition!
Targets for next time - remember to use the full range of punctuation, use the vocabulary fans
well done keep up the good work
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