Friday, 8 February 2013

100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Matt Hi

He was in the forest to get to a log cabin he had been told about by his friend.  It was dare.  It was so risky because there was a man who would take the people and would make them do chores for him.  If they tried to run they would appear back in his house and get put in a jail for however long he chose.  He makes them do things such as mine get fire wood, get food and build weapons.  he always notices when they are gone because he set a time for them.
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3 comments:

  1. Sarah Findlater13 February 2013 at 15:20

    Such a scary story Matt! Good use of a short sentence for impact.

    Target for future - use some more description language to create the picture of the setting in the readers mind.

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  2. Anonymous14 February 2013 at 15:14

    a really scary story matt but i think it was enjoyable to read - katiebaden

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  3. Anonymous14 February 2013 at 15:22

    a spooky story, but its pretty cool (y) - danjackson

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