“The Alley-Way”
I was slowly walking down the dark alley-way, when I met
a man named Anthony. He was a bit strange, but otherwise a lovely man. Then all of a sudden he pulled out a piercing dagger; he stabbed me hard with it.
I
staggered to the ground like a corpse being thrown wildly without care. I
screamed for help - no one came. I slowly crawled in agony to the end of the
alley-way. All the people I thought I knew, didn’t even help me. I thought they
were my friends! Just seconds after, I painstakingly bled out to my eternal death.
some great vocabulary used Dan. I love the phrase "being thrown wildly without care'.
ReplyDeleteTarget for future - experiment with exclamation marks and question marks for effect.
good work dan well done
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