Friday, 8 February 2013

100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Dan J

“The Alley-Way”

I was slowly walking down the dark alley-way, when I met a man named Anthony. He was a bit strange, but otherwise a lovely man.  Then all of a sudden he pulled out a piercing dagger; he stabbed me hard with it.

I staggered to the ground like a corpse being thrown wildly without care. I screamed for help - no one came.  I slowly crawled in agony to the end of the alley-way. All the people I thought I knew, didn’t even help me. I thought they were my friends! Just seconds after, I painstakingly bled out to my eternal death.

2 comments:

  1. some great vocabulary used Dan. I love the phrase "being thrown wildly without care'.

    Target for future - experiment with exclamation marks and question marks for effect.

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  2. good work dan well done
    georgia

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