It was a dark gloomy day; it felt depressing going to school on a day like this.
I wish the school would close because its been snowing for 6 days non-stop. All
my teachers and classmates feel the same as me; we think it’s ridiculous that we
have to come to school when it snows.
The windows are all frozen so we can’t see
outside. I’m guessing it’s bad because there’s no internet connection. Then
suddenly it came. The words from heaven “the school is closed due to the snow”.
“YES” we cried. It’s the best news we’ve heard in ages!
I'm guessing you based this on recent events Will. Good use of speech marks for dialogue.
ReplyDeleteTarget for future - use some unusual vocabulary, stretch yourself.
good work will keep it up
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