Friday, 8 February 2013

100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - William

It was a dark gloomy day; it felt depressing going to school on a day like this. I wish the school would close because its been snowing for 6 days non-stop. All my teachers and classmates feel the same as me; we think it’s ridiculous that we have to come to school when it snows.

The windows are all frozen so we can’t see outside. I’m guessing it’s bad because there’s no internet connection. Then suddenly it came. The words from heaven “the school is closed due to the snow”. “YES” we cried. It’s the best news we’ve heard in ages!

2 comments:

  1. I'm guessing you based this on recent events Will. Good use of speech marks for dialogue.

    Target for future - use some unusual vocabulary, stretch yourself.

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  2. good work will keep it up
    georgia

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