Winters warning
It was a cold winter’s day all was silent but the rattle
of the branches of the pine tree against the window making it impossible to
sleep, the constant howl of foxes hunting for food. The silent forest was
enticing me, I couldn’t resist I had to explore. I hobble down the stairs
stumbling at the bottom step, I reach the door the handle is cold I get my
gloves and unlock the door, take a step outside and hear a voice saying “I’m
over here Aaron follow my voice” I shouted “who are you and how do you know
me”...
Some brilliant vocabulary used and wonderfully creative as always Jordan. I love this.
ReplyDeleteTarget for the future - be careful with your sentence length. Use the literacy mat to help.
nice poem
ReplyDeletecool poem
Deletegood work well done
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