Friday, 8 February 2013

100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Jordan

Winters warning

It was a cold winter’s day all was silent but the rattle of the branches of the pine tree against the window making it impossible to sleep, the constant howl of foxes hunting for food. The silent forest was enticing me, I couldn’t resist I had to explore. I hobble down the stairs stumbling at the bottom step, I reach the door the handle is cold I get my gloves and unlock the door, take a step outside and hear a voice saying “I’m over here Aaron follow my voice” I shouted “who are you and how do you know me”...

4 comments:

  1. Some brilliant vocabulary used and wonderfully creative as always Jordan. I love this.

    Target for the future - be careful with your sentence length. Use the literacy mat to help.

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  2. good work well done
    georgia

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