Its Monday again, me on my own walking around like a lost puppy in the big wide
world. Why doesn’t anyone like me? What have I done wrong? Is it because I’m
different?
It’s so out of the blue anyway it's the firsts lesson of the year
and the worst lesson ENGLISH the teacher is so nice but I just can't get the hang
of it and I have to sit next to the school bully Jack. He’s so annoying and
always calling people names for no reason but anyway I hope he knows what coming
for him in the future.
This must be made up Shakirah, English is clearly the best lesson in real life! Good use of rhetorical question to get your reader thinking.
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good story shakirah nice use of vocab keep up the good work georgia ellis
ReplyDeletereally good poem shakirah i think you have thought alot about what you was going to say and i think it was really good and i loved reading it well done katie x
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