Friday, 8 February 2013

100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Hannah

Falling asleep, sometimes I am on a beach with my family that I won’t see. Sometimes I’m falling and can’t stop it; it just frightens the life out of me out of the blue. Dreams normally end in nightmares, scary as they are they come and go when they like - controlling your mind.

I overthink with my mind, they run over and over…

As I lie here thinking what this mess has done to me, it’s like my own mind is against me. Circling, confusing, over-powering, fighting, turning.. Bang! It was out of the blue.
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3 comments:

  1. Sarah Findlater13 February 2013 at 19:35

    A very emotive piece Hannah - such a mature tone to this piece.

    Target for future - experiment with including descriptive language.

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  2. Anonymous14 February 2013 at 15:18

    very good peice of work hannah well done
    georgia

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  3. Anonymous14 February 2013 at 15:23

    good use of Onomatopoeia

    Alison

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