Friday, 8 February 2013

100 Word Challenge - Out of the Blue - Ryan

One day on the island of Zimbabwe, Jayson Brodey is running from Vaas and his men. The men have their guns and are in their cars. Jayson is kidnapped. Then he manages to escape the camp.

Suddenly, as he is crossing the road across the river, the road brakes and he falls in to the river. He gets knocked out on his way down stream. A man with no name pulls him out and brings him to his camp and gives him food and water and a gun. He is now going to kill Vaas.

I wonder what will happen?

3 comments:

  1. A very creative setting Ryan. Will done for starting a sentence with an adverb.

    Target for the future - use some unusual vocabulary, challenge yourself.

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  2. well done thats so good

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  3. good work ryan keep up the good work
    georgia

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