Out of the blue -
what does this phrase mean to you?
One hundred answers for one simple question.
Out of the big blue ocean,
where lots of great plans are set in motion.
As we set out to sea,
the big blue question scares me.
Alone in the blue.
Out of the blue never failed,
as my ship slowly sets sail.
Bang. Crash!
What to do in the deep, deep blue?
A well crafted and original piece Alison. I love your use of alliteration and the rhetorical question.
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really good poem alison, it was really detailed and you put alot of effort into it, well done .
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ReplyDeletevery good use of vocab alison keep up the good work
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